Monday 24 October 2016

Starting with the Basis


At the beginning of October, Kim Kardashian West was spending some vacation time in her Paris apartment when she was faced with a vicious robbery, threatening her life. Stolen from her was millions of dollars worth of jewelry, including her $5 million ring. The robbers broke in and tied Kim up, holding her hostage at gunpoint.
The lead is effective because it's an update on the armed robbery of Kim Kardashian west. It makes people want to read about the new updated alert.
This is a quote found in the article by Jean Veil, her Paris-based lawyer.
"She is very calm and very determined over a matter that was particularly violent. If she is summoned to France, she will come to France, but judges also have the possibility of moving [to the United States]."
The  most important information told first was recapping what was shared in the first news article on the topic. This new update tells us what was stolen and how Kim is doing since the scary robbery.
The story had a good ending. It gave us all the new updated information but was suspenseful, to have the reader wanting more.
Below is a link to the article:
http://perezhilton.com/2016-10-17-kim-kardashian-determined-to-catch-paris-robbers-report#.WAZavpMrJfQ